Hi! A new update!

Hi everyone! Just a quick note to say that I've started a new novel! I'm very hopeful about this one, got a good feeling about it. Very exciting! Hopefully I will be putting up a few snippets from each chapter as I finish them. Hoping it will keep me motivated! Any comments would be much appreciated, I need as much encouragement as possible. Anyway, I've finished the prologue and started Chapter One, hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it.

Here's part of the prologue :)

"I am better than you, black!" Eighteen-year-old Ronald spat out the cruel words and smiled grimly. He swung his gleaming sword at his older opponent, Samuel Black, who ducked just in time. But not before Ronald Hunter's sword took a few brown hairs from his head. Samuel snarled harshly,
"You nearly took my head off moron!"
"Sorry, I missed your ugly head, shame you couldn't saunter around with your head missing, carried in the crook of your fat arm. Would have loved to see that!"
Samuel screeched with fury, the arena seeemed to distort slightly, growing darker and with an eerie clapping sound the lanterns extinguished themselves. Ronald looked around him in fright, then his gaze returned to Black's blazing dark eyes. Embers flew as Samuel Black skilfully pushed his fire sword against Ronald Hunters steel one. Ronald gasped as flaming sparks flew in his sweat stained face. Samuel spoke now his voice rising in anger,
"Ha!! You may be clever with words you cowardly worm! But get you with a sword and you're like a frightened little schoolgirl with pigtails!"
"Don't you dare say it!!" Ronald said with a snarl, aiming a cruel blow at samuels heart, samuel dodged easily.
"Say what exactly?" Samuel asked, brandishing his fire sword and aiming a cruel blow at Ronald's left elbow.
"My pathetic nickname at Aligned College!" Ronald glared, daring Samuel to say it.
"No, I shouldn't...Rachael."
"Get bent. I was only called that cause I had a squeaky voice and l.ong hair!" Ronald lunged at Samuel who just laughed and said simply,
"Rachael. Rachael! Rachael!!"
Ronald spun and flashed his sword in a wild flurry of moves that could boggle the mind.

And that's part of the prologue...coming soon...part of Chapter One...
Any comments would be useful :)